Monday, 8 November 2010

Feedback 8.11.10

Faheem and Luqmaan,

Your research is showing improvement, however, you need to make a few alterations. Firstly, the name of your blog should be your names - please change this.

You need to prove who the audience is! You have used audience theory to say who they are but show me that you are correct in thinking these people would actually like this artist and also find out from them what they like from artists and their videos. You need to do some primary audience research - questionnaires. Then collate the data, present it as charts, graphs etc and analyse the results.

Analsyse the charts results - what does tis tell you? How does the information help you with your planning? Is your genre popular?

The genre posts need illustrations/egs from actual videos. You can use stills and/or embed the actual videos in the blog.

Finally, you must show evidence of planning! You should have completed the planning by now but there's no evidence of it on here. I know you have been planning but you need to keep updating this blog. You haven't worked on tis since wed, 3rd Nov - unacceptabe! You must work on this in your own time!

See me with any problems.

Mrs Abell

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